Group 3 Blogs
Albert Gotama 2/10
Good Points
- He wrote something.
- His English is understandable
- He has Photos
Bad Points
- He has a lot of missing posts.
- His blogs are unorganised and not labelled , hence , it is difficult to understand which posts is for which.
- His posts are very draggy.
Audy 8/10
Good Points
- I am inside her blog , hence the high mark (jk)
- She has the most completed works amongst the groups.
- Her blogs are somewhat organised.
Bad Points
- Her blogs are rather boring to read.
- Her words used are quite hard to understand.
- Her posts are too long and draggy.
Jayce 3/10
Good Points
- She has good English.
- Honest and talks about herself.
- She did something.
Bad Points
- Lots of missing blogs as well.
- Blogs were unorganised
- Blogs are quite boring.
Asmira 8/10
Good Points
- Very well organised
- Has the most interesting and fun blogs amongst the group.
- Has good english and are easy to understand and relate.
Bad Points
- A few missing blogs
- Some blogs are way too long and she should cut to the chase.
- Some of her blogs makes no sense
Phoebe 7/10
Good Points
- Well Organised.
- Very honest inside her blogs showing her character.
- Has good english and are easy to understand.
Bad Points
- Some missing blogs.
- Some blogs are either too short , or too long.
- Some blogs makes no sense.
Asmira is the winner by vote from my whole group. Personally , even if Asmira has the best works , she has missing post , thus her work is incomplete. I personally believe Audy is the best amongst them as she does her work , her work is complete , and she met most of the requirements , just that her works are slightly boring.
How does it feels to have power for critics?
I've been criticised and also critics others before. As we are pursuing art, we will be hearing a lot of criticism be it , constructive or destructive criticism. I believe critics are a way for us artists to learn the minds of others. However, how we handle this criticism is another matter. We could be making a perfectly sculpted sculpture but still get critics from other , like "The nose is too big". We shouldn't be mad or sad and get pissed at that person. It could be a matter of perspective. Ask him to look differently, at a different angle. Ask him to visualise and think how we artists try to portray our
arts.
If we are unskilled and still developing, criticism are a way for use to grow , understand our mistakes and also learn that life does not revolves around you. Other peoples are living in this world and each and every individual has different taste and thoughts.
How does it feel to have power for critics ? I feel that I'm helping others whether they want to give a ear , or not.